Wednesday, January 13, 2010
Vacation
Vacation is fun because you get to go somewhere that entertains you. Like for kids you would probably want to go to Disney World, but if you are in middle school you would probably want to go to the Gulf of Mexico and go swimming and stuff like that. Vacations are a lot of fun if it’s somewhere you want to be
The best vacation that I’ve ever been on was when we went to the Gulf of Mexico it’s just we weren’t in Mexico we were in Florida. Most of the vacation the weather was warm but toward the end the weather got into the sixties and since we were so used to the warm weather we had to where sweatshirts.
I really liked that vacation it was a lot of fun. And don’t forget that vacation is a lot of fun if it’s somewhere you want to be.
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I like how you restated your thesis for this paragraph at the end. That's exactly what you need to do when writing longer essays.
ReplyDeleteYou did a nice job expressing your thoughts on vacations. Next time you might want to try to giving more specific details when writing about a personal experience.
Vacation is always better if you are in a place that you like.
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