Tuesday, September 28, 2010

The Deception

I liked this short story very much. Although “ the book should go farther though to see what happens after they go home and what the dad does to Eli. There are many reasons why this book is realistic, the plotline goes along with irony.

This story is realistic because the main Eli lies to his parents and he doesn’t tell them, and he lied to them because he knew he had bad grades because his parents would be mad at him. Another thing that is realistic about this story is that his parents don’t find out that he lied right away. The last reason is that in the end of the book his parents are clueless about him ripping up the note that was sent home and then his parents got very mad at him.

The short story follows the plotline of irony because there is chaos in the very beginning, because he ripped up the note that his parents were supposed to get. Then Eli
tries to fight for sanity because he doesn’t want to get in huge trouble. Then there is
also a dominant force which is Dr. Remezel because he is in control of Eli. And then
ends with them just walking out because they don’t know what else to do.

So over all I liked the short story very much and I would recommend this to
someone who needed something to read. The story followed the exact plotline of irony
except it was realistic otherwise it was fine. I would read this again if I was bored
and I didn’t know what to do because it was that good f a short story.

Thursday, September 2, 2010

I liked the first dya of school because we got our laptop and we got to sit around all day. What i didn't really like about the first day of school was that we didn't get to meet any of our teachers and we that we had to take a tour of the school even thought everyone except the new kids so i don't get why they couldn't have just taken the new kids on a tour of the school.

Thursday, May 13, 2010

hockey

Hockey is my second favorite sport although i do want to be on a profetional hockey team its still not my favorite sport. My favorite sport is definatly baseball. My favorite part of baseball is the parts where there is a ball that is hit out of your reach to far to one side so you have to sprint then dive and catch the ball for an out then the player on base that tries to tag up and run to the next base and then you through them out. Some parts that I like about hockey is when there is a tied game in over time and there's 30 seconds left until the next break and your line goes out and on the buzzer you shoot and you score.

Wednesday, May 12, 2010

My favorite sport in the world is definatly baseball. It doesn't seem like a fun sport because all you do is hit a ball run around the bases and try to get the person out but it also takes more than that. It also takes mechanics for hitting, pitching, fielding ground balls, and much more. If there wasn't such thing as baseball i would invent it and then i would be a milionare because if someone bases one of their ideas off of yours that person have to pay you money to keep their idea.

Monday, April 26, 2010

Cape San Blas the Best Place Ever


Imagine yourself at a paradise where you can do pretty much anything you want to there. In the Great city of Cape San Blas that is exactly what it is like. Although it is known as the “forgotten coast” people who live there like to keep it hidden and most tourists let the secret slip away. There are some pretty amazing places I went on my last trip to Cape San Blas, but there were also some boring parts too.
On My last trip to Florida I did many very boring things. During our drive down to Cape San Blas we went through Illinois, Indiana, Kentucky, Tennessee, Alabama, and Georgia. It may not seem like it took very long at all but it was twenty hours that we had to sit in a van with ice cold seats and only animal crackers to eat, the ride definitely felt like more than twenty hours. Another boring part of our trip to the cape was when we first got to our families condominium, we unpacked everything at one time and it literally took 3 hours to unpack it all.
After a while things started to get less boring and more entertaining. Some of the cool things we eventually started getting into were crab hunting, swimming in the ocean, going to the pool, boogie boarding, skim boarding and making a camp fire of the beach after watching the sunset. When we went crab hunting we weren’t very successful but it was still pretty fun catching tiny little crabs and the letting the crabs go back into the ocean. Going boogie boarding and skim boarding weren’t very hard though because the waves were huge. Swimming was also pleasurable, in the ocean and in the pool. The last thing but also the most fun that we had in Cape San Blas was watch the sunset and then have a camp fire.

Monday, April 19, 2010

Cape San Blas

Imagine yourself at a paradise that you can do pretty much anything you want to there. In the Great city of Cape San Blas that is exactly what it is like. Although it is known as the “forgotten coast” people who live there like to keep it hidden and most tourists let the secret slip away. There are some pretty amazing places I went on my last trip to Cape San Blas.

Tuesday, March 30, 2010

Spring vacation

Spring vacation is a lot of fun because you get a full week of school and you normally go to a place that is sunny and soothing. The thre things that I am going to do is boogy board in the ocean because it is tons of fun, swim in the pool by the condos, and go crab hunting at night because it is very entertaining.